I don't know if this has any bearing on how many books I sell, but this is what I wrote. If it makes me come across as too weird to look into, please tell me:
Your comments are welcome.
Your comments are welcome.
I just updated my Amazon 'About the Author' bio ... is this too silly?
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If your books are irreverent and silly, maybe this would work. But if you're pitching that sci-fi thriller series you mentioned in another thread with this kind of author bio, I'd wonder if this is typical of your writing style, and probably pass.
IMHO, it sounds like you're trying too hard to be clever. I'd suggest keeping it as simple and neat as possible.
IMHO, it sounds like you're trying too hard to be clever. I'd suggest keeping it as simple and neat as possible.
I agree with Brightdreamer ^. It sounds like you're trying to hard to be clever. Instead of trying to make me think you're pretending to be weird in order to catch my attention, I think you'd do better to be fairly straightforward, with maybe a touch or two of wit. I see that you have several books on Amazon. Referring to your prior successes might be a better way to go. 
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I would recommend you visit some famous author bios and see what they say and then remember, they can get away with clever because well..they're famous.
This doesn't seem appropriate. I'm sorry.
On a positive note, you are entertaining.
This doesn't seem appropriate. I'm sorry.
On a positive note, you are entertaining.
I think you come across as either slightly demented, or really a bit too impressed with your own hilariousness. Or both.
this; I don't know that I have ever read an author bio before buying the book, but if I read that one I'd shelve the book, strongly suspecting the author was going to be too preciously self-aware for the story to hold me
This one ^ works for me. "Emerging writer" engages my interest, and the mention of your other works leads me to think I might be interested in this one. Good job.
Much better. Now I think 'serious writer' not in the 'has no sense of humour' way, but in the 'is professional and serious about the craft' way. But it still shows that you're a person with a real life and interests outside writing. I'd much rather buy a book from him than from the drunk 12 year old that wrote the other bio
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I also prefer the second. I'm not a fan of serious writer bios, but the first seemed too frenetic. The second, your original, gives a sense of who you are.
The second one is more appropriate, but I did enjoy reading your first version.
Thank you - and thank you to everyone else who offered their feedback and support. I really appreciate your help.
The second bio works. The first one reads like the author ate too much Halloween candy.
Side note: ANYBODY who binge-watches 'Firefly' ... again, is okay in my book. If you were running for office, I might be swayed.
Side note: ANYBODY who binge-watches 'Firefly' ... again, is okay in my book. If you were running for office, I might be swayed.
I vote for the second, more down-to-earth bio. Maybe your blog would be the place for the freeform wit?
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