I'm writing a science fiction piece. When I start in the MC's everyday life it's pretty exciting. This is a young man driven to seek advancement. The rug is going to get pulled out from under him at 15K words, and again at 20K. In fact it's going to be terrible.
This is a tale of the MC rebuilding his life. I'm worried that 30K is too long to wait until the complete decay takes over. There is all kinds of other disaster, but the personal one takes time to get to.
Would this be offputting to you as a reader? It's all flash and pop, then his life changes. I'm worried that it might seem like an artificial hook, but I want to show what he's losing. Where he winds up is going to be pretty damned good though.
This is a tale of the MC rebuilding his life. I'm worried that 30K is too long to wait until the complete decay takes over. There is all kinds of other disaster, but the personal one takes time to get to.
Would this be offputting to you as a reader? It's all flash and pop, then his life changes. I'm worried that it might seem like an artificial hook, but I want to show what he's losing. Where he winds up is going to be pretty damned good though.