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Hi! I am writing a HF novel set on the X century and in the middle east.
This is middle age right before the crusades.
Some of my characters would say things as "Aye"; refer to the ass as arse and say "bloody" whenever something goes wrong (among other similar terms).
One of my beta readers was severely frustrated because the characters sounded (to her) "british" even when did not live in an english speaking country.
My reasoning to use these terms is to provide the reader some sense of being in the middle age; although my intended audience is american.
To illustrate below is an extract:
"Ma'am Mariam, you can do with the bloody kingdom what you please. You can wipe up your "arse" if that gives you any satisfaction, or worse hand it to this snake of L for him to fuck it..."
What are your thoughts of using these terms for characters that are not in an English speaking country?
Tx for your help!
This is middle age right before the crusades.
Some of my characters would say things as "Aye"; refer to the ass as arse and say "bloody" whenever something goes wrong (among other similar terms).
One of my beta readers was severely frustrated because the characters sounded (to her) "british" even when did not live in an english speaking country.
My reasoning to use these terms is to provide the reader some sense of being in the middle age; although my intended audience is american.
To illustrate below is an extract:
"Ma'am Mariam, you can do with the bloody kingdom what you please. You can wipe up your "arse" if that gives you any satisfaction, or worse hand it to this snake of L for him to fuck it..."
What are your thoughts of using these terms for characters that are not in an English speaking country?
Tx for your help!
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