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Here are three sentenced from a current draft of a short story "Clorinated Girl"
Her son strokes in water overhead. He kicks big splashes across the surface. Long, limber muscles pull him from one end to the other as she sinks in her mother’s pool.
Thanks! It is fun to see the short story forum active.
Her son strokes in water overhead. He kicks big splashes across the surface. Long, limber muscles pull him from one end to the other as she sinks in her mother’s pool.
Thanks! It is fun to see the short story forum active.