Sharing a Nano excerpt [warning: long, about 1,300 words]

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I just wanted to share this scene from my 2013 Nano because I liked it. Yes, there are so many things wrong with it (yegads, all those tense changes!) but I liked this because although I wrote it within the final hour or so, trying to beat that clock, it is redeemable that I won't have to completely scratch it.

This is in its unedited version.
I hope others will share parts that they're especially proud of too, mistakes and all! Maybe we can enjoy a good laugh too. :)
 
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I'd love to share, but I'd be happier if we could do it in one of the password-protected Share Your Work forums. Maybe a mod can advise...?
 

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good idea. I'll delete this one and redo at a SYW.

ETA: I couldn't delete the thread. I've started on in the SYW though.
 
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I've already started another thread under SYW, but yes, please remove this one. Thanks!

Generally, we don't delete threads, but I'll ask someone who can to lock this.

(I'm not a mod for this section, so I can't do it myself.)
 
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