I demand a recount!
-Derek
Yo, Florida, your chad is hanging.
I demand a recount!
-Derek
Yo, Florida, your chad is hanging.
So punctual!Today 12:00 AM
Time's up! Results incoming any second! Excitement!
Impossible! I sacrificed a goat! And a chicken! The voices assured me--!There is no SECOND PLACE...
...because we have a TIE for FIRST PLACE!
No! NO! NOOOOOOOO!!!... DEREK!
... but he has to share it with...
... ME!
Envy? Haahaa, yup I am envious of your fish as I am hungry But I sure as heaven don't envy your smellTsk, such envy. I can't help being talented.
Retribution? Sounds kinda ominous... I like it!*Files fish smell comment away for later retribution*
*Files fish smell comment away for later retribution*
QFT! Why, your talent is exceeded only by your humility!Tsk, such envy. I can't help being talented.
doesn't bring any more information to the piese. - Laura
See? If that ain't love, I dunno what is!!...
But seriously, congrats to everyone and I gotta say, Deb... I didn't recognize your writing. And Darth D, you seem to like writing about relationships and pain, lol. I was looking forward to seeing entries from Ten and Boss, but maybe next time
...
I get no love
I, too, commented without having entered
I didn't think much of the ringers compared to the "real" entries. They didn't tease, they didn't grab, they seemed mostly setup.
In a contest that's built around grab factor, they proved less attractive than entries whose character, setting and conflict elements were more prominent.
Methinks aspiring writers don't have big name appeal and/or fans willing to overlook slower pacing and setup, we have to grab the reader's attention faster and squeeze harder.
Arrggh!!!! What's that??!!!!!
But seriously, congrats to everyone and I gotta say, Deb... I didn't recognize your writing.