I'm working on a query for an underwater fantasy novel and I'm looking for comparisons with an ocean flavor. Mainly I need something to describe a feeling of surprise/amazement/shock when my MC sees something astounding.
Such as...
-It hits him like a tidal wave.
-His jaw drops open like a clamshell.
-His stomach clenches like octopus tentacles were wrapped around him.
-His eyes bulged like a scared pufferfish.
...as you can see, the ones I came up with are terrible. Well the first one might not be too bad, although to me it sounds cliché.
I want to say his eyes widened like _______ (but I can't think of anything in the ocean that widens to finish this sentence).
Any thoughts?
Such as...
-It hits him like a tidal wave.
-His jaw drops open like a clamshell.
-His stomach clenches like octopus tentacles were wrapped around him.
-His eyes bulged like a scared pufferfish.
...as you can see, the ones I came up with are terrible. Well the first one might not be too bad, although to me it sounds cliché.
I want to say his eyes widened like _______ (but I can't think of anything in the ocean that widens to finish this sentence).
Any thoughts?