Hello all,
I am a new user to the site and a new writer, I was wondering if telling too much information really necessary. For example, this is a small section from a story I am currently writing..
[FONT="], I needed to know more about them if I was going to fight them. I know what you're thinking, “ Why fight them, why not just run”, well if they are as big as I think then there is no where I can run. The way those people in the suits looked at me, it was like I was something they feared, something that if the world would find out about then they would be shut down.
[/FONT][FONT="]Any thoughts?[/FONT]
I am a new user to the site and a new writer, I was wondering if telling too much information really necessary. For example, this is a small section from a story I am currently writing..
[FONT="], I needed to know more about them if I was going to fight them. I know what you're thinking, “ Why fight them, why not just run”, well if they are as big as I think then there is no where I can run. The way those people in the suits looked at me, it was like I was something they feared, something that if the world would find out about then they would be shut down.
[/FONT][FONT="]Any thoughts?[/FONT]