In my novel Detective 12, I have the POV character dealing with his ubiquitous computer, which responds mostly verbally.
Question 1: How can a lengthy dialog (1 page at a time, several dialogs) be formatted to show this? What is most common?
Question 2: A POV Character (actually an AI Agent) is responding as though he is a person. I have tried to use terms that would apply to people and computers equally so the Reader will not immediately know that it is a computer speaking. BTW: The computer does not have emotions and does not want to kill mankind. Any comments?
Question 3: I want to show the actions that the computer AI takes to accomplish a technical scene, rather than just say "the computer went POOF and it happened". Any thoughts?
Question 1: How can a lengthy dialog (1 page at a time, several dialogs) be formatted to show this? What is most common?
Question 2: A POV Character (actually an AI Agent) is responding as though he is a person. I have tried to use terms that would apply to people and computers equally so the Reader will not immediately know that it is a computer speaking. BTW: The computer does not have emotions and does not want to kill mankind. Any comments?
Question 3: I want to show the actions that the computer AI takes to accomplish a technical scene, rather than just say "the computer went POOF and it happened". Any thoughts?