Where are you? (in your novel)

They've escaped and are now trying to get to safety, while also dragging along a prisoner. Right now would be a terrible time for one of them to become temporarily incapacitated due to a flashback, so naturally that's what just happened.

Space opera: MC fights to get his spacecraft back, when an incoming message distracts him just long enough to open an unexpected window of opportunity for the enemy. Neither of them is aware that a rather cute, third party is eagerly waiting to make an appearance.

Lilly

I'm on Chapter Ten, approaching the turning point between my main character Gwen, and Phenex, which is brought about by an interesting bit of information she receives from the Greek god, Apollo.

Just finished my first novel and received my first review from one of my betas!

Currently suppressing my urge to start a new WI while I brainstorm how to overhaul Seer.

Cliff Notes: Seer needs an extra three or four layers of worldbuilding and I need to include the plot details I managed to leave out.

ETA: Congrats, Lizzie7800. That sounds so exciting!

Slate has just killed a man, the man who sired him, for raping his mother. But, did he?

Charlotine thinks she's about to participate in a demonstration to end discrimination against her kind. Lol nope.

Lizzie7800 said:

Just finished my first novel and received my first review from one of my betas!

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Wow, great job!

Chapter 11. My two MCs (1 male, 1 female) finally met.

Working on that R&R thingie, going pretty well. I think. HOPE. Different direction for some of the minor characters, and sig. change to a pivotal scene. And I'm cutting, adding, moving chapters around. . .

Yikes.

My MC has just been told she has cancer and has been admitted into the hospital. She's told her husband and is now figuring out how she's going to tell her children and the rest of the family, along with trying to wrap her head around the fact that it's actually happening to her.

My WIP stalled before just after the second-act turn when a major character died. That was at about 55k words. I'm rewriting now with a renewed focus on what the book is about, and I've gotten past the turn and are heading into the third-act setup for the climax. Very slow going, but I have to admit that I'm more distracted by other concerns with this novel than with any other novel I've written.

A twin brother and sister are on an inevitable quest for the truth, but he's not quite sure it lies in their past, in the mysterious identities of their parents. Also, he's gripped in an emotional turmoil that she would never understand. Little does he know...

I'm lying in front of a brick wall.

But for this thread's sake, Judah has more or less figured out by now that he's going to lose his job.

My antagonist sent a text to my protagonist, informing the latter that he trespassed on her property.

In a future Europe, T. is having dinner with her Dad in their skyscraper apartment, just before the apocalyptic sh*t will hit the fan.

The good guys just fought some big robots. Now they're going to fight some smaller robots, then have some tea. Then... pirates!

I'm floundering around in the mid-section again, trying to keep everybody afloat.

Emily just pulled a very high-school move on Archie. He said something that she thought made her sound like a whore, and when he refused to set things straight with their friends, she very loudly said she would have had sex with him but, ya know, he couldn't quite get it up. I got a kick out of that. BTW, this is 1830 in Philadelphia.

MC on a bus bound for the bright lights of Broadway, fathers voice ringing in her ears 'you are not my daughter'

It's 1936, and Lily is about to learn that benzedrine isn't just an over-the-counter inhalant for breathing problems.

About to hit the climax. And I mean this is a completely non-sexual way.

Annotated outline complete, subject to change, but complete. Writing chapter 21 of 43. One scene to finish before the mid point event happens.

I can hardly wait. I need to go write now.

Fitch

Guilds of Galyndor sequel

I have finished chapter 6, with the Guild students visiting a foreign country and about to begin learning new abilities.