HORROR HAIKU

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Can this be a thing please?

I'd love to see him
No longer covered in skin
Liberate my love

Her pulse tempted me
I needed to stop the sound
It's quiet today

They have been waiting
When I fall Asleep they come
Rip my veins away

I'm not actually sure if you can use contractions in hiakus.
I'm probably breaking the rules.
Play along with me?
 
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I'll play if you'll spell haiku correctly. :D
 

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Spelling things correctly had never been my forte.

I prefer to think of it as "creative spelling".
 

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I wince every time
I see your thread title, Rotes.
Please, will you fix it?
 

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And if you happen to create a very strange haiku
With syllables fourteen, ten, and fourteen,
Congratulations! You've got yourself a "Double Helix."
 

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Creative spelling?
If I can't understand you
Your story's untold
 

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The title's been fixed
Now, prepare for the demons
Who will eat your soul
 

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Not gonna happen
Horror haiku is good stuff
*chews Russian's neck off*
 

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Russian's dying thought
Need fourteen more syllables
Enter the Tanka


Earth trembles in fear
Fire rains from angry skies
Seas churn and boil
An evil wind sweeps the land
The ancient ones have returned
 

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It's sort of a low blow to blame the school.
It's not their fault. I'm a biochemistry major.
 
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