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I'm wondering if you're referring to something that's been edited out of the OP here because the sentence 'we looked up to a blue sky' is already active.We looked up to a blue sky. Change to active and condense to one sentence
I like WillSauger's explanation that the narrator is relating events in the past, even if the facts are still true.
"The scent of lavender overpowered Kieran’s senses as he walked into their bedroom."
Tense is decided from what POV you're telling the story from....
Tense is decided from what POV you're telling the story from,
No, their contention was that "the sky was blue" is a passive voice. Except, as I've pointed out, it isn't.