Is there a rule about having a space between all the dialogue in a novel? I've only ever seen that done in one series (a French one), but all the others, like for example, Harry Potter, Outlander, Mortal Instruments, etc. don't have those spaces...
Is it just a matter of preference?
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Example (mind you, in my word document, the lines are double-spaced):
Doing this:
“What… What do you mean his wallet?” Malika asked. Maybe if she said it too fast, he’d make a mistake again and repeat the same thing. The detective looked at her with a sympathetic expression.
“We found your brother’s -”
“There must be a mistake!” she said. Why wouldn’t he just understand that it couldn’t be possible? Her brother, Patrick, had disappeared ten years ago, but had been presumed dead. Malika had always believed he was still alive, somewhere, but now that there was news after all this time, she felt angry. She didn’t want to hope all over again.
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Versus this:
“What… What do you mean his wallet?” Malika asked. Maybe if she said it too fast, he’d make a mistake again and repeat the same thing. The detective looked at her with a sympathetic expression.
“We found your brother’s -”
“There must be a mistake!” she said. Why wouldn’t he just understand that it couldn’t be possible? Her brother, Patrick, had disappeared ten years ago, but had been presumed dead. Malika had always believed he was still alive, somewhere, but now that there was news after all this time, she felt angry. She didn’t want to hope all over again.
Is it just a matter of preference?
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Example (mind you, in my word document, the lines are double-spaced):
Doing this:
“What… What do you mean his wallet?” Malika asked. Maybe if she said it too fast, he’d make a mistake again and repeat the same thing. The detective looked at her with a sympathetic expression.
“We found your brother’s -”
“There must be a mistake!” she said. Why wouldn’t he just understand that it couldn’t be possible? Her brother, Patrick, had disappeared ten years ago, but had been presumed dead. Malika had always believed he was still alive, somewhere, but now that there was news after all this time, she felt angry. She didn’t want to hope all over again.
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Versus this:
“What… What do you mean his wallet?” Malika asked. Maybe if she said it too fast, he’d make a mistake again and repeat the same thing. The detective looked at her with a sympathetic expression.
“We found your brother’s -”
“There must be a mistake!” she said. Why wouldn’t he just understand that it couldn’t be possible? Her brother, Patrick, had disappeared ten years ago, but had been presumed dead. Malika had always believed he was still alive, somewhere, but now that there was news after all this time, she felt angry. She didn’t want to hope all over again.
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