First, congrats on almost finishing a draft of your novel!
From all the unpublished work I've seen, I'd say most, if not all, writers have "tics": words, phrases, punctuation, etcetera that they like way too much. It seems they take care of them once they're made aware, though.
I don't think we are able to spot everything in our own writing though, and would never send anything out without putting it through several critiquers/or beta readers first. Although much of what is suggested probably won't work for you, I'm sure you'll also find more errors that you were unaware of.
Beyond that, it's hard to suggest alternatives for the specific thing you're talking about without actually seeing it. Good luck!