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Uhhh, I have a problem where "subplots" are concerned.
The entire story is subplots. I have cut out most of the subplots from the query and that's why it seems like fluff and nothing's actually happening. If I cut the actual subplots from the story, there is no story at all.
I'm thinking probably this novel should be scrapped entirely.
The entire story is subplots. I have cut out most of the subplots from the query and that's why it seems like fluff and nothing's actually happening. If I cut the actual subplots from the story, there is no story at all.
I'm thinking probably this novel should be scrapped entirely.