Heat. Urgh. I hates it!
I really hate it when you all but evaporate during the day and the news tries to tell you the max was 32 that day.
Yeah. In my FRIDGE maybe!
I think writing short is better MM - far better to breed extra darlings than put existing ones to sleep, don't you agree?
I haz a conundrum.
Outlining was a great idea, and the structure is tight. But it's almost too tight. Extra scenes have no where to go. Hmph. I think I can squeeze the busking scene in, but the others I had planned - not going to work.
Glad I read it before writing them now, that's for sure.
So now I must slow bits down by playing with what I have. Doable, but annoying. Ah, the joys of writing, hey?
The good news is the sex scene I thought was awful turned out to be pretty decent. A few minor tweaks (boom tish) is all I need to do.
There's a couple of overly graphic terms that had me scratching my head (and reaching for the red pen) though. I must have written it after a stint in the bordello.
I really hate it when you all but evaporate during the day and the news tries to tell you the max was 32 that day.
Yeah. In my FRIDGE maybe!
I think writing short is better MM - far better to breed extra darlings than put existing ones to sleep, don't you agree?
I haz a conundrum.
Outlining was a great idea, and the structure is tight. But it's almost too tight. Extra scenes have no where to go. Hmph. I think I can squeeze the busking scene in, but the others I had planned - not going to work.
Glad I read it before writing them now, that's for sure.
So now I must slow bits down by playing with what I have. Doable, but annoying. Ah, the joys of writing, hey?
The good news is the sex scene I thought was awful turned out to be pretty decent. A few minor tweaks (boom tish) is all I need to do.
There's a couple of overly graphic terms that had me scratching my head (and reaching for the red pen) though. I must have written it after a stint in the bordello.