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I'm helping someone edit and I'm just not sure if the following is grammatically correct or if it is, if it's just confusing. The issue is concerning the colon, followed by a new indented paragraph, followed by the dialogue.
Tommy stormed into the party, pushed his way through the bustling crowd, reached the dance floor where his ex-girlfriend was embarrassing him, and sad:
"Who do you think you are? How could you have done this to me?"
Now this writer does this a lot--which is, they have a colon, then start and indent a new paragraph for the dialogue. Is that grammatically acceptable or commonly practiced?
I thought it might be, but that the colon should be replaced with a comma.
Thoughts? And thank you.
Tommy stormed into the party, pushed his way through the bustling crowd, reached the dance floor where his ex-girlfriend was embarrassing him, and sad:
"Who do you think you are? How could you have done this to me?"
Now this writer does this a lot--which is, they have a colon, then start and indent a new paragraph for the dialogue. Is that grammatically acceptable or commonly practiced?
I thought it might be, but that the colon should be replaced with a comma.
Thoughts? And thank you.