Proper Noun Q

CarbunkleFlux

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Just a quickie. For anyone who provides their knowledge/assistance, I am grateful.

I have a character that references herself as a witch. From then on, she is referred to as "the witch" in narrative and by other characters. Does that suddenly make it a proper noun (the Witch) or do I still lowercase it (the witch)? Or is it even conditional?

Likewise, "I cannot bear to see you come to harm, my chieftain" <--- I only treat it as a proper noun when it's used directly to refer to a character, right? "Chieftain Xavier, you are blahblahblah." or "But Chieftain, I insist!"
 

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Don't capitalize witch unless it is actually being used as part of a proper name. For example, if her name was Hazel, and people actually called her Hazel the Witch.

Hazel the Witch is coming.
Hazel, the witch, is coming.

I would capitalize chieftain only when it's being used directly as a name with no other word attached to it, i.e., the, my, etc.

Chieftain Xavier
But, Chieftain, I insist!
Don't go, my chieftain.
Here comes the chieftain.
 
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