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[FONT="]*isigh* I should probably come here first when I have a problem, because I've searched for an answer with no luck. My question is about punctuation in this piece of dialogue:
"To you, sex is like eating and peeing, a basic necessity of existence. You want the freedom to f*ck others, but you don’t want me to say anything. So instead of asking ‘How was your day?’ I should ask, ‘How was your f*ck?’ and be happy about it."
My question concerns this part: [/FONT][FONT="]So instead of asking ‘How was your day?’ I should ask, ‘How was your f*ck?’ and be happy about it. [/FONT][FONT="]Is the punctuation correct? [/FONT][FONT="]*sighs again with frustrat[FONT="]ion[/FONT]*[/FONT][FONT="]
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"To you, sex is like eating and peeing, a basic necessity of existence. You want the freedom to f*ck others, but you don’t want me to say anything. So instead of asking ‘How was your day?’ I should ask, ‘How was your f*ck?’ and be happy about it."
My question concerns this part: [/FONT][FONT="]So instead of asking ‘How was your day?’ I should ask, ‘How was your f*ck?’ and be happy about it. [/FONT][FONT="]Is the punctuation correct? [/FONT][FONT="]*sighs again with frustrat[FONT="]ion[/FONT]*[/FONT][FONT="]
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