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Yes, so sorry. I got caught in a time/space warp and thought I was in the First Three Sentences Thread. Time to beam out and hide in a corner.
Wow, this is awesome. Looks like your editing sessions are working out nicely for you.
This book can't get published fast enough for me.
Crow was beautiful — not handsome, as men were supposed to be, but artful, as if his mother had carved him from marble, paying special attention to the curve of his cheekbones, the tilt of his lips, the slant of his black eyes. He wore his hair tied back, a few strands loose against his neck. A single earring graced his ear. It was a sapphire.
From BAD MAGIC:
Because I'm a sucker for pretty boys.
Okay, cliffhanger number one...
They moved into the living room through a doorway without a door...
She wanted to go back into her story...
I took the job at Circuit City. Remember in Shawshank Redemption when Andy Dufresne crawled through a mile of shit to freedom? ...
She said that the ocean bled salt into her wounds. ...Horses are not made to carry a rider’s weight. ...
That was what the west was like....
Quite pleasant.Because I'm a sucker for pretty boys.
Since it looks like this book'll never be published, I thought I'd share my favorite line. It's a young adult book about a girl who writes stories she can then enter. Maybe it's corny, I don't know, but I'm obsessed with it.
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She wanted to go back into her story. There was nothing for her here with this Calloway. She wanted the one from the story, the story that oozed out of her like sticky desire, no shape, no bones, just want-want-want and wish-wish-wish, rhythmic like a heartbeat, hopes made real and sickly sweet.
From BAD MAGIC:
Because I'm a sucker for pretty boys.
Since it looks like this book'll never be published, I thought I'd share my favorite line. It's a young adult book about a girl who writes stories she can then enter. Maybe it's corny, I don't know, but I'm obsessed with it.
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She wanted to go back into her story. There was nothing for her here with this Calloway. She wanted the one from the story, the story that oozed out of her like sticky desire, no shape, no bones, just want-want-want and wish-wish-wish, rhythmic like a heartbeat, hopes made real and sickly sweet.
I agree with Beth, this is quite stunning. Is this a romance?
And for your information, I am not some sloppy 28 Days, Amy Winehouse, Lifetime drama alcoholic. I just like to drink when I party. And to relax. And also during holidays. Okay I like to drink a lot, but I’m no friggin alcoholic.
A bit o' this:
‘What do you want to do when we get home?’ he asked, with his ankle against my ankle, and I said, ‘Maybe watch a movie?’ which was the wrong thing to say, judging by the way his mouth turned down while his eyes stayed up. We would watch someone spurt platitudes on a stage, the way we always did, and our bodies would knock against each other but not answer.
And for your information, I am not some sloppy 28 Days, Amy Winehouse, Lifetime drama alcoholic. I just like to drink when I party. And to relax. And also during holidays. Okay I like to drink a lot, but I’m no friggin alcoholic.