So I'm writing my first draft of my major first WIP, and my writing seems so basic. XD I know I can edit later, so I keep trucking.
It just seems all "She walked over to here and sat down. He followed her, but crossed his arms instead. Resting her head upon the table, she closed her eyes. Watching her, he smiled."
It's always, she walked over, he sat down, she smiled, he did that, she did that, etc--and only the form of the sentence changes.
Is this normal? Is like to prepare myself for editing. XD
It just seems all "She walked over to here and sat down. He followed her, but crossed his arms instead. Resting her head upon the table, she closed her eyes. Watching her, he smiled."
It's always, she walked over, he sat down, she smiled, he did that, she did that, etc--and only the form of the sentence changes.
Is this normal? Is like to prepare myself for editing. XD