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I constantly stress over sentence construction. With that deleterious compulsion in mind, I have a question. Of the following sentences, is one more "correct" (as far as writing is concerned) than the other? To clarify, the MC is smoking a cigarette.
His brows knitted together as he sucked in a final drag.
As he sucked in a final drag, his brows knitted together.
IIRC, I read somewhere that it's "weak writing" to begin a sentence with as. *sighs* Any help would be greatly appreciated (including how to stop re-writing sentences a million different ways).
His brows knitted together as he sucked in a final drag.
As he sucked in a final drag, his brows knitted together.
IIRC, I read somewhere that it's "weak writing" to begin a sentence with as. *sighs* Any help would be greatly appreciated (including how to stop re-writing sentences a million different ways).