Here's mine- first draft of my novelization of my novella Beautiful Trgaedy.
They had never said “I love you” before tonight. But he has said it first, so he must mean it, Daphne's train of thought raced. Sitting in front of the glowing computer screen with the biggest smile ever on her face, she reeled at the thought of someone saying “I love you”, and meaning it.
They had never said “I love you” before tonight. But he has said it first, so he must mean it, Daphne's train of thought raced. Sitting in front of the glowing computer screen with the biggest smile ever on her face, she reeled at the thought of someone saying “I love you”, and meaning it.