Hi everyone,
Here's my dilemma: I have been advised to start where the story actually starts... Getting as close as possible to the 'beginning' is when my protagonist, Claire meets the antagonist, Jake. The issue is that Jake comes into her life when he joins Claire's daughter and her group of friends, that would mean that on scene 1, we would meet Claire, Jake, Natasha (the daughter), who are the three main characters, alongside 6 other teenagers.
It goes against all advice given on introducing a maximum of three characters in a first scene.
Originally, I had started with Claire and Natasha discussing the arrival of a new guy amongst Natasha's friends, then going through Jake's POV meeting the youths, in which case I thought it was ok to feel a bit of whiplash at meeting so many people in one go because that is how Jake feels, so that I could then concentrate on how Jake and Claire first interact with each other.
But that was deemed too slow, not at the heart of the action.... Maybe I just didn't write these scenes in an exciting way enough, with not enough tension...
Any advice/ ideas on how I can work around these issues???
Here's my dilemma: I have been advised to start where the story actually starts... Getting as close as possible to the 'beginning' is when my protagonist, Claire meets the antagonist, Jake. The issue is that Jake comes into her life when he joins Claire's daughter and her group of friends, that would mean that on scene 1, we would meet Claire, Jake, Natasha (the daughter), who are the three main characters, alongside 6 other teenagers.
It goes against all advice given on introducing a maximum of three characters in a first scene.
Originally, I had started with Claire and Natasha discussing the arrival of a new guy amongst Natasha's friends, then going through Jake's POV meeting the youths, in which case I thought it was ok to feel a bit of whiplash at meeting so many people in one go because that is how Jake feels, so that I could then concentrate on how Jake and Claire first interact with each other.
But that was deemed too slow, not at the heart of the action.... Maybe I just didn't write these scenes in an exciting way enough, with not enough tension...
Any advice/ ideas on how I can work around these issues???