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Old 04-07-2013, 12:19 AM   #1226
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Old 04-21-2013, 08:18 AM   #1227
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Old 04-24-2013, 06:04 AM   #1228
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lingers silent,
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until the slip of life betrays
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Old 04-28-2013, 09:17 PM   #1229
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Old 04-29-2013, 10:15 AM   #1230
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gospel,
intimate truth,
an anchor for the soul,
holds court; choose your freedom wisely,
fear God
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Old 04-30-2013, 07:46 AM   #1231
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Old 05-03-2013, 12:40 AM   #1232
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Shocking
reds and yellows
after months of bleak grays.
May woke to find the tulips in
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Old 05-03-2013, 08:15 PM   #1233
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Old 05-05-2013, 07:25 AM   #1234
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rosey,
the world in hue
transposes perspective,
faux realities, deluding ;
clearly
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Old 05-06-2013, 10:27 PM   #1235
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Clearly
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Old 05-13-2013, 08:52 AM   #1236
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Volume
a recorded number
held by an old bookshelf
waiting to be picked.
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Old 05-15-2013, 06:54 AM   #1237
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Book:
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Old 05-19-2013, 07:44 AM   #1238
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Speak true
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assert, declare, richness
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Old 05-20-2013, 05:37 PM   #1239
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Lecture
talk, mumble, hiss,
speak nonsense to the hills.
Pontificate to the masses—
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Old 06-02-2013, 11:53 PM   #1240
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Brainwash
and soul cleansing.
Sleeping at Marshfield Falls—
the sound of nearby thunder goes
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Old 06-05-2013, 06:25 PM   #1241
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Unheard
gray-faced soldiers
march, casting long shadows
beneath the low sun of winter
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Old 06-05-2013, 11:46 PM   #1243
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Formal.
Dressed up Haiku?
Cinquain feels strange on me,
Or maybe like a spelling bee.
Formal.
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Old 06-06-2013, 09:03 AM   #1244
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Old 06-06-2013, 09:17 AM   #1245
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Proper.
I didn't know.
Please don't cry anymore.
Why did it come off with your hat?
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Old 06-09-2013, 05:29 AM   #1246
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Old 06-09-2013, 08:45 AM   #1247
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Of hair,
I know little.
I have always been bald.
A long fingered Sengir knows more
Of blood.
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Old 06-17-2013, 01:39 AM   #1248
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Old 06-17-2013, 02:45 AM   #1249
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Fluid,
thou wrecks the feet,
wet from raw heel to arch.
Toecapped tootsies slide, tormented.
Squish squish.
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Squish, squish.
We've come for you.
Seaweed and saltwater.
Can you hold your breath forever?
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