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I usually write high fantasy and hard science fiction, but this time the muse visited upon me something quite different. I think it's an urban fantasy medical thriller.
I am looking for feedback from a thriller writer or serious fan so that I can get an idea of how well/badly I've fit the genre. The novel is named AIRBORNE and the first draft clocks in at 94k. I suspect it needs trimming.
First scene of the prologue (730 words) here.
Tough/harsh crits are not a problem. I'm a self-publisher, graduate of Viable Paradise, and a long time member here -- though I haven't been very active in a while.
Glad to trade crits in the fantasy or sci-fi field. Erotica is no problem. YA is not my strong suit, but I'm willing to try. I tend to be a tough critter and I especially focus on world-building.
I am looking for feedback from a thriller writer or serious fan so that I can get an idea of how well/badly I've fit the genre. The novel is named AIRBORNE and the first draft clocks in at 94k. I suspect it needs trimming.
First scene of the prologue (730 words) here.
Tough/harsh crits are not a problem. I'm a self-publisher, graduate of Viable Paradise, and a long time member here -- though I haven't been very active in a while.
Glad to trade crits in the fantasy or sci-fi field. Erotica is no problem. YA is not my strong suit, but I'm willing to try. I tend to be a tough critter and I especially focus on world-building.