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I'm not used to writing dramatic action scenes and am hoping for advice from those of you who are. My novel opens with a very dramatic moment that appears to result in death for the MC (she jumps off a cliff). Because the scene begins with the jump (which will result in unconsciousness but not death), I'm not sure where to go from there. Obviously if I follow the plot in a linear fashion, the MC will fall, be unconscious and it will be over too soon (maybe a 2-paragraph scene). At the same time, I don't want to burden the reader with backstory in the first scene.
The only things I can think of to follow the jump off the cliff are to have the MC's life flash before her eyes (just a sneaky way of getting backstory in) or narrate the recent events that led up to the jump (how she got on the mountain, what she's doing there, etc.). The POV is 3rd person limited.
I'm not happy with these options but can't think of others. Any advice would be appreciated, including recommendations of books that begin in a similar way.
The only things I can think of to follow the jump off the cliff are to have the MC's life flash before her eyes (just a sneaky way of getting backstory in) or narrate the recent events that led up to the jump (how she got on the mountain, what she's doing there, etc.). The POV is 3rd person limited.
I'm not happy with these options but can't think of others. Any advice would be appreciated, including recommendations of books that begin in a similar way.