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Describing stuff is awesome and can be really satisfying, but I hate that you can't just write down what happened. No, it has to flow and be well paced, too T^T
That's the most annoying part of writing for me. You can sort of tell when part of something you wrote isn't working. Like:
"Lucy stepped into her room and froze. Her things were strewn across the floor, and a burly man wearing a red stocking mask was shoving her belongings into a rucksack labelled Stolen Stuff. The thief noticed her standing in the doorway and ran at her. She pulled out the gun she always kept in her pocket and shot him and he fell over in a heap."
I've just written that, but it's a good example of what I mean. Even though I get everything across it still sucks and there's obviously something wrong how it plays out. The scene is sort of functional but it isn't ready yet. I know I could fix it by maybe playing with the length of each action, and possibly adding a bit more emotion for Lucy, so that there's more immediacy and emotion... I think.
Still, doing this is expanding and rethinking and tweaking is what I like least about writing and I seriously procrastinate for days because I hate fixing it up so much. I would probably just rush out a first draft in one day if I didn't think having to fix a whole book of this ^ would make me run screaming for the hills.
Ugh.
That's the most annoying part of writing for me. You can sort of tell when part of something you wrote isn't working. Like:
"Lucy stepped into her room and froze. Her things were strewn across the floor, and a burly man wearing a red stocking mask was shoving her belongings into a rucksack labelled Stolen Stuff. The thief noticed her standing in the doorway and ran at her. She pulled out the gun she always kept in her pocket and shot him and he fell over in a heap."
I've just written that, but it's a good example of what I mean. Even though I get everything across it still sucks and there's obviously something wrong how it plays out. The scene is sort of functional but it isn't ready yet. I know I could fix it by maybe playing with the length of each action, and possibly adding a bit more emotion for Lucy, so that there's more immediacy and emotion... I think.
Still, doing this is expanding and rethinking and tweaking is what I like least about writing and I seriously procrastinate for days because I hate fixing it up so much. I would probably just rush out a first draft in one day if I didn't think having to fix a whole book of this ^ would make me run screaming for the hills.
Ugh.