First line of NaNo 2014

KateSmash

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Started over from zero.

The room went silent right about the time Jessia's lip split open.​
 

DamaNegra

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Do two sentences count as cheating?

Quickhands approached the ledge very carefully. About a foot away from the drop, his courage faltered and he approached the cliff face in a squat, his hands firmly planted on the ground to help his balance.
 
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Cheering you all on!
It's NaNo. It's very hard to cheat at anything ;)
 

Lissibith

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I knew this MC was going to be trouble when this is the first line he gave me.

"I f#$&ing hate nature."
 

BrumBall

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"Wow, what a day." Huey took his eyes off the road to glance across at his silent colleague.