My 1st three lines
If one day, whoever is in charge of this universe, decides to rip away my voice and crush it in there palms. I will laugh: Not in agreement or because I am a some sort of sick fuck. I will laugh because with or without a voice I will always be heard-no matter what.
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Grammar and misspellings have been noted by others so I will not comment on those, other than to say they kicked me out of the flow instantly. But that's easily fixed.
Based on these lines, I would not continue reading much more. The coarse language comes too early and it's presence does not yet feel earned. I get that some bitterness drives the speaker, and I might excuse the language for a bit until I can learn enough to make a decision, but not for long. If this is an MC whose whole vocabulary is largely dependent upon such expletives, then I would not be a suitable reader for that story.
A bitter diatribe at the outset can hook me though, if I'm connected quickly enough to the reason. It worked for Milton's Satan, so it can work for your character.
My biggest problem is the interior sentence, along with bits and pieces of what follows. In my opinion it is too much invested in redundant exposition. Given the initial tone, I think editing for quicker/sharper pace would work better. For example: "If one day, whoever is in charge of this universe, decides to
rip away my voice and crush
it my voice in
there their palms. I will laugh. With or without a voice I will
always be heard-
not be silencedno matter what."
Hope this is useful to you.