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a) You don't need the blue texts at all. Humans have been assassinating in close range with knives for centuries with great successes. No need to reiterate and get into gruesome details before anything happens. You're not writing a "how to" manual, after all.
Also, it reads to me like it's saying, "a well-trained assassin is well trained". A lot of words to state the obvious.