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I just got finished with my story and am now starting to edit it. A bit wary of the 81's reputation, I'm not so sure I should leave a certain thing unchanged.
I invented a resistance group within a ghetto similar to the Gaza Strip, only worse, in a dystopian Israel. They are mostly young men plotting the great escape, and helping out their fellow ghetto dwellers with gestures ranging from guarding them during curfew, over running over vicious military dogs, to trying to detonate the ghetto walls.
They call themselves the Hell's Angels because the ghetto is Hell, and they want to free/deliver its inhabitants, like angels. They are also militant and reckless, but only riding dirtbikes at best. Most of them are idealistic kids.
And in the epilogue I want to have them nominated honorary members by the real 81. I wonder if that's a good idea. Or if any inclusion or implication of the Club is.
Am I being paranoid or should I change the name and the outcome?
I invented a resistance group within a ghetto similar to the Gaza Strip, only worse, in a dystopian Israel. They are mostly young men plotting the great escape, and helping out their fellow ghetto dwellers with gestures ranging from guarding them during curfew, over running over vicious military dogs, to trying to detonate the ghetto walls.
They call themselves the Hell's Angels because the ghetto is Hell, and they want to free/deliver its inhabitants, like angels. They are also militant and reckless, but only riding dirtbikes at best. Most of them are idealistic kids.
And in the epilogue I want to have them nominated honorary members by the real 81. I wonder if that's a good idea. Or if any inclusion or implication of the Club is.
Am I being paranoid or should I change the name and the outcome?