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Hello,
I've got a WIP, that I had stopped working on some years ago, but as of late I started to think about resuming it. The problem is, I think it's a bit awkward / crazy, and I worry it may be in the bad sense.
So I'd like to hear your opinion about the core things of the story, to have an idea if I should have hopes that it could get somewhere, or not.
The story is about a 16 years old guy, who travels somewhat involuntarily throughout very strange worlds. The story is first person, and this guy is 'telling' what is seeing and experiencing, throughout the places he is walking through. He is occasionally talking to people, but:
a) sometimes it is not clear whether he is talking to somebody or having hallucinations and actually talking to himself (Questions & Answers)
b) most of the other characters, besides of the fact that only belong to their scene, may not be very sane. So you would not have like ordinary "character building" for them.
Also,
a) it may be unclear whether the MC is passing through worlds or he's simply having hallucinations.
b) there would be possibly creepy scenes, such as 8-year old girls dancing and laughing, holding human heads in their arms.
I worry:
a) having this story presented as first person, if the MC can be understood as psycho, could that reflect poorly on the author?
b) would anyone enjoy reading something psycho? (if indeed it proves to be so)
c) it may be awkward to express emotions, as first person, such as "I got scared", "I felt guilty about ...", etc. And I wonder how it could be interpreted by the reader.
Any opinions?
I've got a WIP, that I had stopped working on some years ago, but as of late I started to think about resuming it. The problem is, I think it's a bit awkward / crazy, and I worry it may be in the bad sense.
So I'd like to hear your opinion about the core things of the story, to have an idea if I should have hopes that it could get somewhere, or not.
The story is about a 16 years old guy, who travels somewhat involuntarily throughout very strange worlds. The story is first person, and this guy is 'telling' what is seeing and experiencing, throughout the places he is walking through. He is occasionally talking to people, but:
a) sometimes it is not clear whether he is talking to somebody or having hallucinations and actually talking to himself (Questions & Answers)
b) most of the other characters, besides of the fact that only belong to their scene, may not be very sane. So you would not have like ordinary "character building" for them.
Also,
a) it may be unclear whether the MC is passing through worlds or he's simply having hallucinations.
b) there would be possibly creepy scenes, such as 8-year old girls dancing and laughing, holding human heads in their arms.
I worry:
a) having this story presented as first person, if the MC can be understood as psycho, could that reflect poorly on the author?
b) would anyone enjoy reading something psycho? (if indeed it proves to be so)
c) it may be awkward to express emotions, as first person, such as "I got scared", "I felt guilty about ...", etc. And I wonder how it could be interpreted by the reader.
Any opinions?