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I just finished revising my second novel at 42,000 words.
[FONT="]Storyline:[/FONT][FONT="] A court mage and her handmaiden embark with a pair of fugitives to find a missing lordling lost amidst a raging war.
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Okay, who wants to rip it apart?
If I have any takers, I'd like to say that I'm looking for critiques in the wider parts, meaning I want you to tell me if the fundamentals (setting, character, plot) are broken and what you think I can do to fix them.
Critiques I DO NOT want, are sentence or paragraph level critiques.
Also, how do I get the MS to you? When I post in the forum all the formatting gets messed up. Do you know how long it would take me to format a 42,000 word novel in a post? I don't think I can even make a post that long, lol.
[FONT="]Storyline:[/FONT][FONT="] A court mage and her handmaiden embark with a pair of fugitives to find a missing lordling lost amidst a raging war.
[/FONT]
Okay, who wants to rip it apart?
If I have any takers, I'd like to say that I'm looking for critiques in the wider parts, meaning I want you to tell me if the fundamentals (setting, character, plot) are broken and what you think I can do to fix them.
Critiques I DO NOT want, are sentence or paragraph level critiques.
Also, how do I get the MS to you? When I post in the forum all the formatting gets messed up. Do you know how long it would take me to format a 42,000 word novel in a post? I don't think I can even make a post that long, lol.