So I had an idea just now. Let me know if you'd be interested in reading this.
The hero goes to a brothel to collect taxes. The madam isn't happy about this because quite a few of the girls have been sick (thanks to the flu) and have been sent away to recover, but she pays up. She also offers him the hospitality of the house, but he declines - not just because it would be unethical but because he's a romantic under the meticulous, analytical exterior.
He goes downstairs with the check and sees a woman in the common-room. And he's wildly attracted to her at once.
The woman is beautiful, but she's badly scarred, which is one reason she's decided to visit a whorehouse. She's also a foreigner, so she's not as aware of local customs, and she asks him if he works there. He puts two and two together and says yes, yes, he does. Would she care for some company? He already knows some of the rooms on the upper floor are empty.
She agrees and they go upstairs (with him wondering what the hell he's doing, but growing even more aroused as he tries to find out more about her). Of course, she discovers the truth at the end of the encounter. Would it be a problem for you as a reader, though, that he got intimate with her under false pretenses?
The hero goes to a brothel to collect taxes. The madam isn't happy about this because quite a few of the girls have been sick (thanks to the flu) and have been sent away to recover, but she pays up. She also offers him the hospitality of the house, but he declines - not just because it would be unethical but because he's a romantic under the meticulous, analytical exterior.
He goes downstairs with the check and sees a woman in the common-room. And he's wildly attracted to her at once.
The woman is beautiful, but she's badly scarred, which is one reason she's decided to visit a whorehouse. She's also a foreigner, so she's not as aware of local customs, and she asks him if he works there. He puts two and two together and says yes, yes, he does. Would she care for some company? He already knows some of the rooms on the upper floor are empty.
She agrees and they go upstairs (with him wondering what the hell he's doing, but growing even more aroused as he tries to find out more about her). Of course, she discovers the truth at the end of the encounter. Would it be a problem for you as a reader, though, that he got intimate with her under false pretenses?