Thanks in advance to anyone who wants to help.
A sentence from what will (please, please, please) be my query. You do not know how many drafts this thing has been through.
[FONT="][FONT="]This is how I would put it: Agneta takes a grueling job as a maid to claim what scanty resources she can in Depression-era California. [/FONT][/FONT]
But someone else had Depression Era California.
It's a query. I really want to get it right. What would be best, please?
Thanks, again.
A sentence from what will (please, please, please) be my query. You do not know how many drafts this thing has been through.
[FONT="][FONT="]This is how I would put it: Agneta takes a grueling job as a maid to claim what scanty resources she can in Depression-era California. [/FONT][/FONT]
But someone else had Depression Era California.
It's a query. I really want to get it right. What would be best, please?
Thanks, again.
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