Chain, chain, chain, chain of haiku fools

oarsman · Aug 7, 2006

our bent necks in chains
radiating down our spines
the stress of Monday

laurel29 · Aug 7, 2006

the stress of Monday
fades, the anticipation
of Friday grows strong

Provrb1810meggy · Aug 7, 2006

the stress of Monday
you wish for Sunday again
not happening soon

kdnxdr · Aug 7, 2006

not happening soon
at a theater near you
life's reality

Provrb1810meggy · Aug 7, 2006

life's reality
is that you're ugly, alone
a hideous beast

kdnxdr · Aug 7, 2006

a hideous beast
distorter of truth supreme
illusion master

ddgryphon · Aug 7, 2006

Illusion master
now you see him, now you don't
that's a deadbeat dad

emeraldcite · Aug 7, 2006

that's a deadbeat dad
over there, telling the judge
to fvck off and die

drachin8 · Aug 7, 2006

to fvck off and die
that is what i told him last
before the planes struck

kdnxdr · Aug 7, 2006

before the planes struck
faces could be seen in the clouds
heavenly warriors

drachin8 · Aug 8, 2006

heavenly warriors
flaming swords slicing the skies
hurtling to earth

ddgryphon · Aug 8, 2006

Hurtling to earth
hopeless to survive the fall
avert disaster

Cassiopeia · Aug 8, 2006

avert disaster
avoid depression
be happy your alive

Shiraz · Aug 8, 2006

Be glad you're alive
and count your blessings each day
Your life's just begun

Godfather · Aug 8, 2006

you're lifes just begun,
don't blame me for things gone blue,
it's what you make it.

ddgryphon · Aug 8, 2006

It's what you make it
start with a lifeless clay-lump:
shape, blow, you get man.

Godfather · Aug 8, 2006

shape, blow, you get man,
trying to shape and blow all
the people he sees

drachin8 · Aug 8, 2006

the people he sees
are not the people he knows
yet still he smiles on

Rivana · Aug 8, 2006

yet still he smiles on
even when his grin is all
they haven't taken

ddgryphon · Aug 8, 2006

they haven't taken
nearly enough to remove
all my ownership

Provrb1810meggy · Aug 8, 2006

all my ownership
doesn't mean a thing, dear
cause you are everything

*yes, that was extremely cliche*

kdnxdr · Aug 8, 2006

you are everything
of everything you aren't
shadow of a man

Good Word · Aug 8, 2006

shadow of a man
seeking himself everywhere
mirrors mean nothing

A. Hamilton · Aug 8, 2006

mirrors mean nothing
beauty by brail for blind girl
on her wedding day

Ganesha · Aug 8, 2006

on her wedding day
her groom felt such a relief
she cried so deeply