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Post-Apocalyptic Heroic/Fantasy Beta Reader Needed to judge opening 10k (4 Chapters)

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In a post-Apocalyptic world, Stranger, a renowned gun for hire, returns home to find his wife taken and sets out on a journey that will change the world. But with an insane General on his trail and a Steward who will stop at nothing to hold onto power, will he succeed?

I'm looking for someone who's willing to read my opening 4 chapters (10k) and provide feedback.

Adult, Heroic, Fantasy



Anyone interested/able? Please pm me and we'll sort something out.

Thank you for your time. :)
 
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John, you might want to provide a bit more info. Approx word count, target audience (adult, YA, MG?), and a paragraph-length synopsis of the storyline.
 
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I can do an exchange of feedback for the first 2 chapters of my novel (~8k words):

An old, infamous mage travels throughout hostile lands with his son, teaching the young boy that those with power have an obligation to do good. As the two find companions, they also develop enemies, and suddenly, what was once a coming of age journey with minor risks becomes a life and death battle against impossible odds.
 
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