Three Chapter or Word Count (20,000) Swap: Project Adam, Sci-Fi

I'm looking to do either a three chapter or word count (20,000 words) swap for Project Adam:

Walter Montoon is a senior detective with alcohol and pill problems who regrets giving custody of his son to another man. On a midnight run to the liquor store he discovers a young boy hiding beneath an interstate overpass.

The boy has a talent: he can read minds. He doesn't remember his parents or his name. But he does remember the facility. The experiments, the men in surgical masks.

And the monster they are creating.

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Since my three chapters combined are 20,000 words, if you want, I'll look at your first 20,000 too.

No erotica or romance. I'm open to pretty much all other genres.

What I'll give you: feedback. Specifically, I'll point out what I like, what I don't like, and I'll give you suggestions, all aimed towards improving your MS. For examples of my critiquing style see here and here. I am by no means harsh.

What I'd like from you: the same. Do whatever you feel comfortable with. The big question is: would you keep reading?

Interested? Either PM me or email: [email protected]

They're about 20,000 words.

Just a short note: my three chapters combined are 20,000 words. If your three chapters are less, I'll do a swap of equal word count.