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Hi everyone,
I have recently sent my opening chapters out to a handful of literary agents, with some positive comment but no take up. I received feedback from an agent this week saying my opening chapters 'weren't quite ready' and that I needed to work on my syntax more. Therefore, I am looking for fresh pairs of eyes to read my opening chapters and provide some improvement points.
The opening chapters come to circa 8,000 words.
If willing and eager, you may look at the full manuscript, but I do not expect this. I am willing to do some swaps for similar length projects.
Thank you for your time and consideration
P.S Due to patchy internet, I may take a while to respond.
I have recently sent my opening chapters out to a handful of literary agents, with some positive comment but no take up. I received feedback from an agent this week saying my opening chapters 'weren't quite ready' and that I needed to work on my syntax more. Therefore, I am looking for fresh pairs of eyes to read my opening chapters and provide some improvement points.
The opening chapters come to circa 8,000 words.
If willing and eager, you may look at the full manuscript, but I do not expect this. I am willing to do some swaps for similar length projects.
Thank you for your time and consideration
P.S Due to patchy internet, I may take a while to respond.