I wanted to know your opinion on this.
There are two sex scenes in my story which are more romantic in nature than for-excitement, although I hope it will generate a little of the later too.
At the moment, the longest one, (4 pages) is from the male MC, whilst the second, which is much shorter (1 and 1/2 pages) is from the female MC.
Does that seem weird to you? Would you prefer both to be from her perspective?
The first scene is when he focuses on pleasing her (probably why it lasts longer), the second is when she is feeling very horny and focuses on him as she is raring to go (hence why it is shorter)
Does that make it more acceptable to have the scenes from the current POVs?
Looking forward to hearing your views...
There are two sex scenes in my story which are more romantic in nature than for-excitement, although I hope it will generate a little of the later too.
At the moment, the longest one, (4 pages) is from the male MC, whilst the second, which is much shorter (1 and 1/2 pages) is from the female MC.
Does that seem weird to you? Would you prefer both to be from her perspective?
The first scene is when he focuses on pleasing her (probably why it lasts longer), the second is when she is feeling very horny and focuses on him as she is raring to go (hence why it is shorter)
Does that make it more acceptable to have the scenes from the current POVs?
Looking forward to hearing your views...