Cinquain Train

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red boil
a red hot pin
today these two shall meet
followed by a tissue or two
how gross
 

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May I try this?


how gross
erotica
can be betimes, but some
instance lovely passionate too
- turn on
 

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I'm old
When I was young
I worked from dawn to dusk,
YOU! Get the hell off my lawn,
Damn kids
 

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poem soup
tossed in a bowl
left to simmer in its
own raw emotions and bitter
rhythm
 

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rhythm
I don't got it
and even if I did
I am way too old for dancing
old fart
 

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old fart
dressed smart the day
of his daughter's wedding
dressed smart (same suit even) in his
coffin
 

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coffin
marbled in Lent
among other gentry
sarcophagi appalling time;
stained glass
 

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listen
beyond measure
honing in on pulses...
ineptitude, or, my senses
adrift
 

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who cares
what is spoken
a cacophony of
voices, each straining to be heard
drowned out
 

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drowned out
in all the noise
and stress of daily life
the joy of watching girls and boys
laughing
 

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laughing
must stay in style
it's appropriate in
naked truths as well as in white
robed ones
 

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Heroes
come and heroes
go into the sunset
leaving a bloody mess behind
Big help
 

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preaching
will not reach you
patience is hard, I watch
you flounder, flail to disaster
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alone
is not my style
I need some warm cuddlies
Will someone please give me a hug?
that's nice