Very interesting. Now I'm just off to go take out the first paragraph where I have my MC looking in a mirror .
Very interesting. Now I'm just off to go take out the first paragraph where I have my MC looking in a mirror .
The background story of why she moved to Denver is on mediabistro: http://mediabistro.com/galleycat/
I submitted to her yesterday and she got back to me within two hours with a request for a partial. *happy dance* I was surprised. Normally if I get a response that fast it's a rejection.
Did she give you any reasons?
Yeah, she said that she didn't connect with my main character. I read back through it and totally see what she's talking about. So I'm going back for rewrites again in a little bit. I might try to resubmit after that to her but it kind of depends on how much gets changed.
I think I sent it last week, so maybe I'll hear back soon. I hope. I haven't heard anything back from ANYONE since I started this querying process almost a month ago.