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Blinkk

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I was going through some old notes and I found this little brainstorm of an idea. This was my opening line to a short I never finished, but I thought I thought of this thread when I read it.

The two ways of escaping Marhawk Prison were good behavior and suicide, and David did not know his manners.
 

Will Collins

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You should never have let her die.

(In italics because it's the characters thoughts.)


One of the people in my head will die this afternoon.

Oh and I love this one, Blinkk.
 

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"We hide in the darkness. We wait. This is how we make war. This is how we survive."
 

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[FONT=&quot]The fastest way to go broke gambling was spending your own money to do so.[/FONT]
 

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Once, there were seven dwarfs, and why there wasn't a full crew was the source of much contention.
 

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Mihael’s comrades joined in his efforts to calm her, but even as her sobs quieted, the voices in her head did not, and she wondered if she was going to be their dinner.
 

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Nope. Its from a book I'm working on :) It's an AI talking in his head

It is also the opening of The Hunt for Red October. Anyone familiar with the Clancy novel is going to recognize it. BTW, they just reenacted the helicopter to sub scene with Marcone of France. Life imitates art.
 

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Putting a hand to his mouth, Dren Saeydrin slurped, and the wayward bit of human meat disappeared down his maw.
 
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My little brother never forgave me for plucking out his eyeball, not for the actual act, but for what I found inside his head.
 
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