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Two of my secondary characters feel weak. There needs to be more interesting aspects of them, and I really can't seem to pick out more qualities to make them well-rounded.
Are there certain techniques you use?
One is the villian's love interest. He has a personality simliar to Dr. Manhattan. Very god-like. Solemn. Lonely.
The other is a quick tempered teenager. Daughter to an MC. There's obvious resentment between her and her father, but it's something that comes out of the bag later on in the story. When I re-read my story, there's just no connection between the reader and the character.
Any thoughts on techniques or possible qualities? (By the way, this is a fantasy)
Are there certain techniques you use?
One is the villian's love interest. He has a personality simliar to Dr. Manhattan. Very god-like. Solemn. Lonely.
The other is a quick tempered teenager. Daughter to an MC. There's obvious resentment between her and her father, but it's something that comes out of the bag later on in the story. When I re-read my story, there's just no connection between the reader and the character.
Any thoughts on techniques or possible qualities? (By the way, this is a fantasy)