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Lost in er...where am I again?
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WriterWho, is she the kind of character that doesn't allow herself to be close to others? That would work if you needed her to be 'innocent'. Emotionally distanced, or closed off works too. Maybe she had to take care of everyone else, and didn't allow herself to indulge in a relationship before. Anyway...it's all I've got!
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Thanks, Syn! I wish she was that way.
Kid 3's FMC is though. That's why it works for her character to be innocent while Kid 2's FMC is just emotionally immature, gaining the same outcome. Mine...not so much. I know I could tweak her a bit, but it just doesn't ring true. I don't know, I'll figure it all out. Probably while I'm writing it! That's how it tends to go for me. |
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