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Brief(ish) history: I originally wrote an urban fantasy novel that was meant to be the first book in a trilogy. It's told from the POV of one character, a young man who's searching for his sister, but about a quarter of the way in he meets another character, a mage, who helps him find her.
Then I wrote some more books, including the second and third one in the trilogy (with more POVs - mostly the young man and the mage) and about this time I realized that they're not just a trilogy--they're part of a series, and the actual MC is the mage. The series now has five books in it, including the trilogy and two others. All of them except the first one are multi-POV (again, mostly the mage and the young man, and sometimes his sister) or from the mage's POV alone. Initially I was trying to do the "mage as MC seen through the POV of someone else" thing, like Holmes and Watson, to keep him mysterious, but I gradually realized this wouldn't work for a whole series.
I realized that in order to fit the first book in the trilogy into the series as a whole, I would need to rewrite it to bring the mage (who's the series' main character) in earlier. So I wrote some chapters from the Mage's POV at the beginning, leading up to a point where his story and the young man's converge (they meet for the first time).
So here's my question: The rest of the story concerns the young man and the mage looking for the sister, eventually finding her, and dealing with a much larger and more dangerous problem than any of them originally suspected. But it's all from the young man's POV. I could recast a few of the chapters from the mage's, but I definitely don't want to do alternating chapters once the two of them meet, since a large part of the story is the young man discovering the world of magic and the supernatural through his association with the mage.
Can I get away with the first 15 chapters or so being alternating POVs, followed by mostly the young man's POV interspersed with a few from the mage's POV? Or would that just get too annoying/confusing?
The book is going to end up around 130-140,000 words with the new material and some cutting of the rest to eliminate fat and unnecessary stuff that was covered in Book 1.
Just to make things clear:
Book 1 - First book in series. Mage's POV, mostly. Young man doesn't appear, since he's introduced in Book 2.
Book 2 - Second in series, first in trilogy. Currently young man's POV, being rewritten to add some chapters in mage's.
Book 3 - Third in series, second in trilogy. Multi-POV (mostly mage and young man)
Book 4 - Fourth in series, third in trilogy. Multi-POV (ditto)
Book 5 - Fifth in series, standalone story. Mage's POV only.
Apologies if this is too confusing! TL;DR version: Can I have a book that starts out in alternating POVs until the two characters meet, then continue the rest almost exclusively from a single POV?
Thanks!
Then I wrote some more books, including the second and third one in the trilogy (with more POVs - mostly the young man and the mage) and about this time I realized that they're not just a trilogy--they're part of a series, and the actual MC is the mage. The series now has five books in it, including the trilogy and two others. All of them except the first one are multi-POV (again, mostly the mage and the young man, and sometimes his sister) or from the mage's POV alone. Initially I was trying to do the "mage as MC seen through the POV of someone else" thing, like Holmes and Watson, to keep him mysterious, but I gradually realized this wouldn't work for a whole series.
I realized that in order to fit the first book in the trilogy into the series as a whole, I would need to rewrite it to bring the mage (who's the series' main character) in earlier. So I wrote some chapters from the Mage's POV at the beginning, leading up to a point where his story and the young man's converge (they meet for the first time).
So here's my question: The rest of the story concerns the young man and the mage looking for the sister, eventually finding her, and dealing with a much larger and more dangerous problem than any of them originally suspected. But it's all from the young man's POV. I could recast a few of the chapters from the mage's, but I definitely don't want to do alternating chapters once the two of them meet, since a large part of the story is the young man discovering the world of magic and the supernatural through his association with the mage.
Can I get away with the first 15 chapters or so being alternating POVs, followed by mostly the young man's POV interspersed with a few from the mage's POV? Or would that just get too annoying/confusing?
The book is going to end up around 130-140,000 words with the new material and some cutting of the rest to eliminate fat and unnecessary stuff that was covered in Book 1.
Just to make things clear:
Book 1 - First book in series. Mage's POV, mostly. Young man doesn't appear, since he's introduced in Book 2.
Book 2 - Second in series, first in trilogy. Currently young man's POV, being rewritten to add some chapters in mage's.
Book 3 - Third in series, second in trilogy. Multi-POV (mostly mage and young man)
Book 4 - Fourth in series, third in trilogy. Multi-POV (ditto)
Book 5 - Fifth in series, standalone story. Mage's POV only.
Apologies if this is too confusing! TL;DR version: Can I have a book that starts out in alternating POVs until the two characters meet, then continue the rest almost exclusively from a single POV?
Thanks!