An agent was seeking a query and the text for a picture book. I sent a short query. Then I presented the text. My text does not rhyme, but it has a certain flow in the way it's presented throughout the story.
Example:
The brown fox ran.
He ran this way
and that way.
This stanza will be repeated several times in the story. Should I have sent it as:
The brown fox ran. He ran this way and that way.
I want to send this to another agent but want to be correct in the format. I don't know if having the stanzas there would help or hinder the chances of an acceptance. I need another opinion. ~karen
Example:
The brown fox ran.
He ran this way
and that way.
This stanza will be repeated several times in the story. Should I have sent it as:
The brown fox ran. He ran this way and that way.
I want to send this to another agent but want to be correct in the format. I don't know if having the stanzas there would help or hinder the chances of an acceptance. I need another opinion. ~karen