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Old 06-18-2012, 05:23 AM   #1
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Hi, my name is Jennifer Hu and I am joining the IB program in Palm Harbor University High School this coming fall. I am currently working on a fantasy series about phoenixes named Wandstream. I was also wondering if anyone could critique my work on this site.
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Old 06-18-2012, 05:51 AM   #2
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Old 06-18-2012, 06:53 AM   #6
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Old 06-18-2012, 03:48 PM   #13
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Old 06-19-2012, 01:20 AM   #16
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