We all hear the old adage, "Show, don't tell." But where does "narrating" fall?
I'm talking about that voice of a narrator 'telling' us about the protagonist, her situation, her insights, and so on for pages before much happens. It's more common in MG novels but I see it in YA, too, and I'm asking specifically about the YA market. I'm reading M@ureen Johnson's 13 Little Blue Envel0pes right now and that's how it starts. I also see it in M@ggie Stiefv@ter's work, which I love. Maybe it's most noticeable in 3rd-person stories because in 1st-person it's just accepted as 'voice.' So I guess my question is, is narrating seen as part of voice in 3rd-person and therefore accepted in literary circles (agents, publishers, critics)? Or is it an old-fashioned technique that's being rejected more often as tastes have changed?
IMHO, narration - when done well - is an asset, at least in certain genres. I'd like to develop my skill at it. But I hesitate in case it's frowned upon more and more as 'telling,' esp. in 'keep-those-fidgety-teens'-attention-or-else YA publishing. I remember reading a reader's review of Stiefv@ater's The R@ven Boys in which s/he lambasted it for being 'too much telling' and I thought, "wait, that's just narration! And that's one of the best things about it!" Not for everyone, sure, but not BAD writing.
Thoughts? Do you like narrator voice in YA? Any great examples to share?
I'm talking about that voice of a narrator 'telling' us about the protagonist, her situation, her insights, and so on for pages before much happens. It's more common in MG novels but I see it in YA, too, and I'm asking specifically about the YA market. I'm reading M@ureen Johnson's 13 Little Blue Envel0pes right now and that's how it starts. I also see it in M@ggie Stiefv@ter's work, which I love. Maybe it's most noticeable in 3rd-person stories because in 1st-person it's just accepted as 'voice.' So I guess my question is, is narrating seen as part of voice in 3rd-person and therefore accepted in literary circles (agents, publishers, critics)? Or is it an old-fashioned technique that's being rejected more often as tastes have changed?
IMHO, narration - when done well - is an asset, at least in certain genres. I'd like to develop my skill at it. But I hesitate in case it's frowned upon more and more as 'telling,' esp. in 'keep-those-fidgety-teens'-attention-or-else YA publishing. I remember reading a reader's review of Stiefv@ater's The R@ven Boys in which s/he lambasted it for being 'too much telling' and I thought, "wait, that's just narration! And that's one of the best things about it!" Not for everyone, sure, but not BAD writing.
Thoughts? Do you like narrator voice in YA? Any great examples to share?